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kwame06



Joined: 14 Mar 2007
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Location: Chicago, IL

PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Yesterday’s Love

I’d love you forever” we told each other/ yesterday
The memories of us together
The movies/ dinner/ sleepovers
Our intimacies
Yes/ I thought you’d love me forever As Juliet/ Delilah/ as Media
Loved their loves/ and you did

Yesterday/ I spoke your name aloud
And heard it recited on the either
Its echoes drumming against
The membrane of time
And I remembered when I loved you
As Romeo/ Samson/ as Jason
Loved their loves/ and I did

You held my heart in your chest
We lived as one/ one pulse/ one beat
I loved you/ as I knew you loved me

But sometime late in the day/ yesterday
I no longer felt you heart/ your pulse/ your beat
I heard your voice/ speaking to me from far away
And I noticed your name no longer kissing my mouth
And I missed it

It is today/ and yesterday is nothing but memory
Echoes/ shades
As much as I loved you/ yesterday/ and I did love you
Yesterday is gone/ Gone/ and not coming back.

this was sent to me in a email by rickeyhood1 ©
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Kimm



Joined: 12 Mar 2007
Posts: 985
Location: Jerzee Stand Up!!!!

PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 11:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

kwame06 wrote:
"Yesterday’s Love

I’d love you forever” we told each other/ yesterday
The memories of us together
The movies/ dinner/ sleepovers
Our intimacies
Yes/ I thought you’d love me forever As Juliet/ Delilah/ as Media
Loved their loves/ and you did

Yesterday/ I spoke your name aloud
And heard it recited on the either
Its echoes drumming against
The membrane of time
And I remembered when I loved you
As Romeo/ Samson/ as Jason
Loved their loves/ and I did

You held my heart in your chest
We lived as one/ one pulse/ one beat
I loved you/ as I knew you loved me

But sometime late in the day/ yesterday
I no longer felt you heart/ your pulse/ your beat
I heard your voice/ speaking to me from far away
And I noticed your name no longer kissing my mouth
And I missed it

It is today/ and yesterday is nothing but memory
Echoes/ shades
As much as I loved you/ yesterday/ and I did love you
Yesterday is gone/ Gone/ and not coming back.

this was sent to me in a email by rickeyhood1 ©


I digs this piece!
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Gulf Coast Diva



Joined: 31 Dec 2008
Posts: 766
Location: New Orleans

PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 1:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kimm wrote:
Gulf Coast Diva wrote:
Today I stand, proud of the ME that I BE
Stumbled through my life as a young ME
How did I find my way?? You tell ME
But… My circumstances don’t define ME

Father taken by the Vietnam War
Mother taken by a drunk with a car
But my feet kept moving

Survived the temptation of troubled friends
Aggressive credit card companies and no ends
But my hands kept working

Broken southern english was my forte
Sat quietly hoping the ridicule would go away
Accused of being stuck up because words would not come my way
If only they knew my silence was from fear, fear of what not to say
But I kept learning

Survived a Chi-Town man who wanted to have things his way
Thought I was a southern gal, and easy prey
Thought he could take and take, afraid to love, he would say
His disfunction was too much to bare, had to move away
But I kept loving

Survived my love for a Thug and his prison collect calls
Oh.. he was from the east coast, I wonder if he’s alive at all
Saw his nose broken, had to be fitted with a brace
Saw his black eye and the scar that mapped out his face
But I kept living

Made a baby with a man who turned out to be OK
Who would have thunk it? That a black man could love a child the right way.
It happens, what can I say
Wouldn’t have had it any other way
But, we didn’t work out so I kept moving.

Baggage on my left hip, child on my right
Survived undergrad school when I decided it was right
Had to turn things around if I wanted to be free
Free to now ask you how did I survive ME!


As I said B4......This thread is far from pointless! Nice work!


Thanks. Chile I got issues... what can I say. Celebrate Your Issues Day!
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Gulf Coast Diva



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Location: New Orleans

PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 2:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

How could you not celebrate one’s art
Searching for your name in every part
I write about experiences and matters of the heart
Your insecurities tried to limit my start

Who are you to censor what I write
Scared that I will bring your wrongs to light
If you lived like a man who knew what’s right
My skills would not bring on such a fright

Perhaps your limitations are yet another form of control
But you can’t limit what one’s heart and mind holds
Not once did you celebrate a word that I wrote
Even when it celebrated YOU quote by quote

You act like Frank Barone, George Jefferson and Archie Bunker .. all in one
Need to learn from Ossie Davis or Barack Obama … you confused native son

Like the scene from Brown Sugar when Sanaa dumped yo boi for not reading her work
I no longer seek your approval … you self absorbed jerk.

And the word for today is ….. JERK!
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And we'll fly
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Paco Eglesias



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Location: Paco City, Mexico

PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 9:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

this is my favorite thread....
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Kimm



Joined: 12 Mar 2007
Posts: 985
Location: Jerzee Stand Up!!!!

PostPosted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The writings reveal....
Secrets of the heart & mind
N attempts 2 heal mankind
But the kind N man is hard 2 find
Amongst these shattered dreams & trying times
I'm....
Writing 2 save lives....especially my own
Hoping that within my written confessions
R valuable lessons
That can move through mankind
When time is testing UR consistency
The writings reveal....
The hunger of mankind
And the kind of man who will make a meal
Out of the starved
The kind N man is severly scarred & barred by fear
Trust thrown 2 the back of the bus
While scandal takes the wheel
I'm....
Writing because I feel a need unfulfilled
I feel a spirit chilled
Because of the ill-will revealed
The writings on the wall tell it all
U don't have 2 say a thing....
Just look around
A country submerging N distress
The kind N man is bleeding profusely
Upon the Whitehouse steps
Hope is instilled N his breath
But mankind must brand loyalty across their chests
We must be the kind of man
Willing 2 play the part
Because the writings on the wall
Spell De Ja Vu'
History of mankind is forming circles
Aging our minds with repetition of flaws
Change is necessary....
The writings on the wall reveal the mistakes
And I face my confessions N search of lessons 4 mankind
Starting with I....
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Gulf Coast Diva



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Location: New Orleans

PostPosted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 2:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ever miss someone and your memories only revive
All the things you love about them and the things you hated are disguised
But when you talk to them, hoping for a change
You realize, that things are still the same
Almost bought your polished attempts to unleash my doubt
But Truth Be told, Almost Doesn’t Count.
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'till we can walk again
And we'll run
Until we're strong enough to jump
And we'll fly
Until there is no end
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Kimm



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Location: Jerzee Stand Up!!!!

PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had 2 4give U.....
Because my shoulders could no longer bare
The weight of hot tempers & cold stares
Though this very same bed which absorbs my liquid pain
We once shared
See, it all seemed so unfair....
That UR heart could not be detained from roaming free
Or that UR eyes couldn't see the blood, sweat, & tears
I endured for years
As I believed there was something wrong w/ me
So I had 2 4give U.....
Because the more I tried 2 hate U
The more I'd find myself tossing & turning
N the wee hours of the morning yearning 2 hear UR voice
N hopes that UR choice is me
But the rising rays of reality N the sun
Painfully stung
Revealing that I am singular N this wishful thinking
I'm speaking from a vulnerable state
I'm speaking from a place where it is usually safe 2 hide
But it's becoming a bit 2 ego-bursting
So I had 2 4give U.....
Because the comparison of she & I
And he & U
Is becoming a bit 2 awkward
N moments where U should never have an invitation
2 invade
I could say U hurt me,
U used me,
U lied 2 me,
U pitied me,
But I allowed U 2
N the name of what I thought was Dwele's "Love Ultra"
So I gotta accept my part N the misconception
I remember staring N her direction
As if she had stolen someone from me....U
But 2 believe N such a lie is foolish
4 a willing heart can never B stolen
So I had 2 4give U.....
4 the same reasons of a new day
4 the same reasons of time's primary function
As what we shared is past tense
And what's present
Presents the difference between what was & what is
Comparisons R frozen & ice cold chills melt w/ the heat of truth
That N order 2 B free & 4give me
I had 2 4give U.....
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Gulf Coast Diva



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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bump .... I needed this today.
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And we'll fly
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msjaim



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Location: city of big shoulders

PostPosted: Wed Dec 17, 2014 5:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

msjaim wrote:
micro heated hot dog
watch it go pop
stinky water, ride the waves
bite if off and watch

wheat buns are nice
when they fit right.. or when Im in the mood
ketchup-mustard-mayonaise.. dont spit it out -THATS RUDE!

3 MINUTE FREESTYLE FOR THAT AZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
wtf, lmao
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